a nice day

[~*mistywater*~]

one day muddypelt was on his way to see mistywater (PS his girlfriend) when he heard something he wiped around and he saw nothing '' ok i know your there cheetahkit come on out" muddypelt said "don't be shy" muddypelt said "how long have you been fallowing me " muddypelt said nicely "a week a mouth six week's how long " muddypelt said with anger getting the better of him

[Angelkat]

Cheetahkit let out a giggle of laughter,half out loud and half to herself.She quickly hushed when Muddypelt turned her way.She looked to her paws,Cheetahkit then grinned and stalked around to where Muddypelt's back was facing,she arched her back but kept low.She moved her paws against the ground and stuck her tail in the air.

Cheetahkit let out a purr/growl then leaped at Muddypelt.She yowled in his ear then pawwed at his back,her claws were sheathed though.
She was still a kit so she didn't have any clue what she was doing or if she was doing it right!

"I've only been following you for...maybe a couple of hours?" she shrugged,then went back to pawwing at his head.Her tail flickered determinidly.

[~*mistywater*~]

i can't stay mad at her she to cute muddypelt thought "do you want to learn how to hunt so you'll be ready to be an apprentice" muddypelt said "first you crouch down and stay light on your feet " muddypelt said "then you crep up on you prey " muddypelt said while creeping up on a mouse " then you jump on it and kill it" muddy pelt said jumping on the mouse but the mouse slipped away before he could get it "FOXDUNG" muddypelt said i looked stupid "opps sorry cheetahkit " muddypelt said "how about you try"

[Angelkat]

Cheetahkit jumped from Muddypelt and sat quietly,listening to her lesson.She examined Muddypelt's steps and stayed,breathless,watching him try to catch the mouse.She let out loud laughter and fell to her back."Ok...I guess I could try." she shrugged when she had recovered from laughing.

Cheetahkit lifted her muzzel to the air,unproffesionaly,she breathed in the smell of a small mouse.She tracked it down quietly,she crouched low....low enough she was almost the same height of the mouse.She growled to herself,Cheetahkit loosened her paws but unsheathed her tiny,black claws.She heard a screech above her and she gasped then looked up,she saw a hawk flying over head then it plowed down.

Cheetahkit screamed and padded to the safety of Muddypelt.She hid behind his paws,her flank was heaving.

[~*mistywater*~]

"come on let's go some where safe" muddypelt went to a rock that was sticking in the air with a slant to it and hid under it "come on cheetahkit, hurry up " muddypelt said with a worried tone he did not want to be responsible for anything that happened muddypelt felt better once the hawk went back up into the air but it swooped back down and clawed at muddypelt "cheetahkit go get help'' muddypelt yelled hoping that the kit would go or anther cat would hear him the hawk clawed at him a cut his shoulder he slashed at the hawk but missed he slashed at the hawk again and cut his neck and the hawk clawed at him again muddypelt pressed him self on the back of the rock but the hawk was to fast and stuck his claw in his other shoulder and pulled him out from the rock muddypelt yelled from all the pain and the hawk picked him up and started to fly away but all of a sudden he heard a gun and the bullet hit the bird almost siting him the bird dropped him a he fell on the ground and the hawk flew away and the twoleg that shot the bird the came over to muddypelt with the very little strength he had he clawed the twoleg and it was a younger one it ran back to his twoleg house starclan let me live and send a cat to help muddypelt somehow got up and walked very slowly back to the camp by sundown he just fell to the ground not even getting inside the camp "someone help me " he rasped he was tiered and hungry he did not have enough power to move any more



(((PS cheetahkit i moved it here starclansunmoon.proboards104.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=fcc&thread=143 it's called a nice day gone bad)))))