Blackpaw,Aprentice,She-cat. Redo

Blackpaw is on the smaller side. She has a red flame marking on her left, back leg. She is also a long-haired cat.

Blackpaw is a very out-going cat. She loves to defead and serve her clan. She is very loyal to all her Clanmates and her Clan. Though she is a new apprentice, she is very skillful in fighting. Blackpaw is very caring and sweet, she would do anything for any of her Clanmates. She is still learning about the ways of StarClan. In a bad situation, she stays calm and listens to instructions and does as she is being told. Shes a very good listener.Blackpaw loves making new friends and is very friendly. She has a big dream of wanting to be the greatest Warrior the forest has ever seen!!!

Blackpaw was born a rogue with her brother. She & he brother got
seperated. She has a half-sister in MoonClan, which is Smokepaw.
Smokepaw's and Blackpaw's mother were different, but their father
was the same. Blackpaw was roaming around the forest, when she
heard a call that said, "Let all cats old enough to catch their own
prey gather beneath Moon Rock for a Clan meeting." She could
obviously catch her own prey, so she ran toward the sound.
Before she reached the camp, she cought the scent of more cats.
She had got afraid, but curiousity got the best of her. Smokepaw
was padding out of camp and ran into Blackpaw. Smokepaw hissed
at the intruder.Blackpaw smelled the scent of her father on Smokepaw,
as did Smokepaw smell it on Blackpaw. "You have my father's scent,"
they both said at the same time. "Perhaps we're related somehow?"
Smokepaw suggested. Without waiting for a reply, Smokepaw took
this cat to Dawnstar and told her she thought they were related.
Blackpaw wanted to be accepted as a MoonClan apprentice. She
would prove herself good as any other forest-born cat!

I've Rped for quite awhile and I enjoy it very much.
Blackpaw carefully walked to the edge of the lake, keeping her ears perked for trouble. She felt the light windy breeze brush against her fur, she loved being out in the sun, all the sunshine made her feel free. Blackpaw crouched down to the ground and quietly creeped up on a near by mouse, Blackpaw stepped on a stick without knowing and the mouse hurried away, Blackpaw dropped her head in failure.